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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

What a tender, beautifully-observed piece—full of quiet intimacy, memory, and the strange poetry of everyday things. I love how it captures the way love changes us, not in grand declarations but through the soft repetition of shared meals, feet rubbed without asking, and conversations that meander from Bertrand Russell to Bass Ale to Gruyère. There’s so much affection in the mundane here, which is what makes it extraordinary.

The potato becomes more than a potato, of course—it’s care, adaptation, compromise, even defiance of your younger self’s preferences. And Joe, in all his odd charm, emerges as someone wonderfully real: opinionated, tender, full of facts, a man who smokes and rants and also remembers how you like your dinner.

You write with such warmth and texture. I felt like I was sitting in the kitchen with you both, maybe wiping my hands on a tea towel, watching the butter melt. It’s funny and romantic and quietly sad in places—but mostly, it feels deeply alive.

Thank you for this. Truly.

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

Gee wiz, it touches me deeply to have my work thought through as you have. Thank you, so very much 🥹❤️

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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

You’re more than welcome. I’m loving your writing so so much 💕

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

You’ve made me smile! ❤️

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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

Along with making want to be a better writer, you have made me smile too 💕

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

🥰

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Lonely Robot Theme's avatar

😻

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BrainFudge's avatar

That was so soft, and well written. It felt like I was a fly on the wall, quietly witnessing the love and intimacy woven into the simplest moments of everyday life.

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

🥹 thank you for saying this. Thats just how I was hoping it’d be received ❤️

So grateful for you reading 🙏

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Howard Beye's avatar

Wonderful writing!

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

Thanks, Howard! 🥰❤️🥲

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Aristidis Marousas's avatar

This made me smile but also feel sad. To have a Joe in your life sounds wonderful.

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

I wish it on everyone ❤️ Thank you so much for reading, Aristidis ❤️

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Susan Coyne's avatar

Love this — as, it turns out, I love everything you write! Glad you and the Midlands, old-liquor-swilling, foot-massaging man found each other. As an American who lived in England before (and lives a quick train ride away from England now), I’m particularly partial to your kind of couple.

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

Susan! Thank you so dang much! I’m glad you're glad we've found each other and I'm glad you and I did too - like-minds online in similar, distant worlds. But seriously - I feel very lucky to have you reading my things these weeks. Thank you ❤️

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annie & words's avatar

^what Lonely Robot said.

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

🥹🥲 you guys are too sweet ❤️

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AJ Ong's avatar

Brilliant, realistic story about love in relationships

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Abigail A Mlinar Burns's avatar

AJ, thank you ❤️ I’m glad to see your name again and so pleased you enjoyed this. It was a dear one to me.

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